Blog Poetry Slam 48: Revolution

I often hear people speak of revolution, but I always feel that is a such a broad word that often gets misconstrued.  I think it means different things to different people and I think if we started defining what this even means then real change can occur.  This leads me to today’s topic, REVOLUTION.   I would love it everyone would attempt to write a poem about what revolution means to you or an example of revolution in your life.  Write your poem in the comments.  It can be long or short, serious or silly, even a haiku.  Here is my poem below:

Some say that I am a love poet
I’m definitely not an over-analytical poet
Certainly not a political poet
Not a fight the power poet
Not talk you to death for an hour poet
But don’t you dare say I’m not a revolutionary poet
I don’t make conspiracy theories
Or talk about the government
But to me revolution
Is just evolution with an R
And I am steadily changing… growing… fighting


But if by revolutionary you mean talking in circles
….and circumventing responsibility,
then by all means you are the spokesperson……
I ain’t buying the fight the power act…..
love, life, and loss…..
that’s what causes a creative commotion in my cranium
when pain permeates my person and pummels and pounds my peace
it is the real revolutions, revelations, and resolutions
that relieve my worries, weary, and woes …
but hey that’s just me


2 thoughts on “Blog Poetry Slam 48: Revolution”

  1. Revolution, I’ll break it down
    Rev me up
    To find a solution
    Let my thoughts
    Revolve
    Around the issue
    Let the doubts
    Clouding my mind like pollution
    Fade away
    As I review what works for me
    Let me be the change I wish to see
    And the revolution will be

  2. Revolutions around a center point,
    constant turnings, and flight.
    Planets running elipses,
    trying to escape gravity
    before being pulled back into line.

    That's what it's all about, you know.

    The movement of the planets,
    revolutions around a sun,
    repeating the attempts
    to move out of an orbit,
    escape the current path,
    reaching the apogee
    running out of energy
    and being pulled back in

    to orbit.

    The universe is a disciplinarian,
    and says stay in your lane.
    Revolution sounds real good,
    but in the end,
    it all comes back around,
    and the path is the same.

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